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It's always great to try and view my art through other's eyes.  I'd like for you all to answer some questions for me, if you could be so kind.

1) What should I improve on?  
2) What do you not like about my art?  
3) What would you like to see more of?

I'll go first:
1) Hands, backgrounds
2) Bland poses and expressions
3) Hot chicks!

See?  It's easy!
Seriously though, I'd LOVE some good general critiques.  DO NOT worry about hurting my feelings.  I'm a big boy with thick skin, and have undoubtedly heard worse.

We can still be friends. :)
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:icondragonlordkris:
~DragonLordKris Feb 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
1) I can’t really say, my skill aren’t much yet so anything better then what I can do seems perfect
2) Not enough in your gallery, put up more :)
3) Hero Redesigns and Hot Chicks :D
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:iconmase0ne:
~mase0ne Feb 6, 2009   Digital Artist
Sounds reasonable - thanks man.
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:icondragonlordkris:
~DragonLordKris Feb 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
yw
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:iconkirbbrimstone:
1. what do you need to improve on? Well that was a hard one for me..I had too really look at your stuff..so I'll just go with you on Backgrounds. Although I am not one to talk.

2.Nothing. Well I wish you'd stop drawing so many Negroes hope about more white people. I think the genera could use more of those. ;)

3.Superhero I guess. More tights!!!!
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:iconmase0ne:
~mase0ne Feb 3, 2009   Digital Artist
White guys in tights - got it! :lol:

Preciate it, Kirb.
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:iconi-like-it-juicy:
1.)Some of the poses are too statuesque. Some move and bounce would be needed where they're not so stiff with joints LOCKED.

2.)Color seems to be dark and muted for my taste. Some more vibrant colors would be next level. Brighten up your color pallet, and work will stand out more, I think!

3.) Action illustration with movement and hot sexy chicks with MASSIVE cleavage.
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:iconmase0ne:
~mase0ne Feb 3, 2009   Digital Artist
1) Excellent point. I'm working on a Spiderman to loosen up, but he's still a bit stiff.
2) I could take a lesson from you in the vibrant color dept.
3) Will do.

Thanks!
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:iconarcherion:
~archerion Feb 3, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hum

1. Backgrounds lack of ^_^
2. Perspective
3. More dynamic poses


Ok i did you now your turn to do mine. ^_^

I like your work over all I think most of your stuff is great.
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:iconmase0ne:
~mase0ne Feb 3, 2009   Digital Artist
All good points - thanks!

Hmmm - for you:
1. You can improve your linework. I'd like to see some clean, finished pencils.
2. Don't like: Much of your work is too referency - relying on reference can easily be a crutch.
3. I'd like to see more off-the-top-of-your-head pieces. You're freehand skills needs some love.

Thanks for the exchange. :)
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